作者:夏銘
For most kids, weekends are a mixture of fun and work. So are my weekends. Now I talk about what I often do on weekends. On Saturdays I finish my homework first, then I help my mother do the housework-clean the rooms, wash clothes, water flowers and so on. On Sundays, I usually watch TV for about two hours at home. Sometimes I go to the park with my parents; sometimes I go to visit my grandparents in the country. I think my weekends are great! So I like my weekends best!
點評:本篇習作用語流暢,語言較為地道。習作者能運用學過的語言,闡述"週末是我的至愛"。從另一個角度也點明瞭本篇寫作意圖:如何看待週末?如何度過週末?值得同齡朋友的深思!這是篇較佳的習作!