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短文改錯解析

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作者:文玉榮

短文改錯解析

(I)

If there are much more people in the world, then there 1. ________

must have more food to feed the people. But food is already 2. ________

a serious problem today. One-thirds of the world's population 3. ________

is starving, because there is not enough food. Ten thousand 4. ________

people die of the hunger every day in some parts of the world. 5. ________

So in other parts of the world, people become ill or die because 6. ________

they eat too much food, and they are too fat. Some country 7. ________

have no food, but others have too much, and they throw away. 8. ________

How can tomorrow's world feed its people? The world needs 9. ________

to produce more food than it is now. 10. ________

(II)

Nowadays, almost every family have a TV set, and almost 1. ________

everyone likes watching the TV. TV becomes part of our life. 2. ________

TV has many advantages, such as, it informs us the latest 3. ________

news that happened in the world; it can open our eye, 4. ________

enlarge our knowledge and also helps us to see more about the world. 5. ________

At the same time, it also has some disadvantages. People waste very 6. ________

much time in watching TV and their normal life and work are affect. 7. ________

To those children which spend too much time in watching TV, 8. ________

it can do harm for their sight and health. In a word, we should take 9. ________

the advantage of TV and control our time of watching TV. 10. ________

[答案與解析]

(I) 1. much→more。形容詞的比較級修飾的中心詞是可數名詞people, 此時應該用many表示"... ... 得多"。

2. have→be。此處是"there be"句型。

3. One-thirds→One-third。分數詞的構成規則是:分子用基數詞,分母用序數詞;當分子大於1時,在分母的序數詞詞尾加"s"。

4. 第一個is→are。本句的主語是指"三分之一的人口",是複數概念,謂語動詞應該用複數形式。

5. 去掉第一個the。此處的hunger表泛指,其前面不用定冠詞。

→But。此處錶轉折關係,與上句的"餓死"形成鮮明的對比。

7. country→countries。由句子的謂語動詞have可知,此處的名詞應該用複數形式。

8. throw後面加it。throw away是及物動詞性質,應該有賓語。

9. 本行無錯。

10. is→does。does指代的是動詞produces。

(II)

1. have→has。family被every修飾,指單數,謂語動詞用單數。

2. 去掉the。TV在此處表泛指, TV前面不用加定冠詞。

3. us後面加of。inform sb. of sth.是固定詞組。

4. eye→eyes。此處的名詞應該用複數形式。

5. helps→help。open, enlarge 和help是三個並列的謂語動詞。

6. very→too。too much修飾名詞time,而very much是用來修飾動詞的。

7. affect→affected。此處是被動語態。

8. which→who / that。先行詞是children,指人,故關係代詞應該用who或that。

9. for→to。 do harm to sb.是固定詞組,意為"對某人有害"。

10. 本行無錯。

(I)

Nowadays, many and more people like traveling, for it has 1. ________

many advantages. The first one is that they can both broaden 2. ________

our horizons and expand our scope of the knowledge. This is 3. ________

because when we visit different places, we would surely have 4. ________

different experiences, as meeting different people and 5. ________

taste different food. The second one is relaxation. After a 6. ________

long period of hard work, we need relax and rest. Only in 7. ________

this way can we renew ours energy. In addition, traveling can 8. ________

build our body, for when we travel, we might have to go on foot 9. ________

or climb mountain. This is a good form of exercise. 10. ________

(II)

My hometown has changed a lot of in the past five years. First, 1. ________

more high buildings have been appeared, which are modern and 2. ________

beautiful. Many overpasses have been set up, but it has become 3. ________

very conveniently for people to travel. Besides, many families 4. ________

have got cars of their own. People lives here have become 5. ________

rich and colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling 6. ________

on holidays. In my delight, I can taste delicious food from 7. ________

different country such as the food of America, Japan and 8. ________

South Korea. And now, it is easier for me to keep touch 9. ________

with my friends as before, for I can email them from my office. 10. ________

【答案與解析】

(I) 1. many→more。more and more表示"越來越多的"。 2. they→it。it指代traveling。3. 去掉the。knowledge在此處表泛指,其前面不用定冠詞。4. would→will。根據上下文的時態,此處應該用一般將來時態。5. as前加such。such as是固定詞組,表示列舉事物。6. taste→tasting。tasting和meeting是並列關係。7. relax前加to。need在此肯定句中是實義動詞,後面接帶to的動詞不定式。8. ours→our。此處應該用形容詞性物主代詞作定語。9. 本行無錯。10. mountain→mountains。此處的"山"表泛指,應該用名詞的複數形式,或在mountain前加a。

(II) 1. 去掉of。a lot是副詞性短語,在此處作狀語;而a lot of作定語,後面應該有名詞。2. 去掉been。appear是不及物動詞,不能用於被動語態。3. but→so。此處表因果關係。4. conveniently→convenient。形容詞作表語。5. People→People's。此處應該用名詞所有格作定語。6. 本行無錯。7. In→To。to one's delight是固定詞組,意為"令某人高興的是"。8. country→countries。應該用複數形式來表達"不同的國家"。

9. keep後加in。keep in touch with是固定詞組,意為"與......保持聯繫"。10. as→than。由上一行的easier可知,此處應該用than。

( I )

A survey basing on 1,000 students found that half of the pupils and 80% 1. ________

of the middle school students sleeps less than nine hours every night.

2. ________

And too many homework given by school teachers and parents is

3. ________

the main reason. Other reason lies in students' bad habits. Some

4. ________

students, for example, are absent-minded while doing his homework,

5. ________

and some waste their after-class time. The third reason is that some

6. ________

students have to get up early on weekdays to get school far away

7. ________

from home. Experts are calling at schools and parents to cut down on

8. ________

the amount of homework. And students should make a good use of their time. 9. ________

And it would be well if they could choose to study in a nearby school. 10. ________

( II )

Yesterday afternoon I went to the Summer Palace. It was happened that I saw 1. ________

a touched event. At that time, some people were boating on the lake. 2. ________

Among them was a family of three. They were taking photo 3. ________

while the girl fell off the boat into the river. She was struggling 4. ________

and her parents cried out, "Help! Help!" That was obvious that they

couldn't 5. ________

swim at all. From nearby, a young man immediately jumped into the water, 6. ________

without taking off his clothes. He quickly swam towards girl, 7. ________

that was already tired out. At last, he carried her to the bank. 8. ________

She was saved! How excited the parents were! They were too excited9. ________

and grateful to the young man that they don't know what to say. 10. ________

[答案與解析]

(I) 1. basing→based。過去分詞作定語。 2. sleeps→sleep。本句的主語是pupils和students,謂語動詞應該用複數。3. many→much。homework是不可數名詞,應該用much修飾。 4. Other→Another。此處指"另一個",而不是指"其它的";others作定語時,常修飾複數名詞。5. his→their。此處的代詞指代前面的名詞"students",故用their。 6. 本行無錯。 7. 第二個get後加to。get to意為"到達"。8. at→on。call on是固定詞組,意為"號召"。 9. 去掉a。make good use of是固定詞組,意為"充分利用"。

10. well→good。well作形容詞用時,指"身體好",用在此處不合適。

(II) 1. 去掉was。It happened that...意為"碰巧......",happen是不及物動詞,不能用於被動語態。 2. touched→touching。 touched意為"感動的",touching意為"令人感動的"。 3. photo→photos。根據語義判斷,此處的名詞應該用複數。 4. while→when。when在此處表示動作的突然性。 5. That→It。It作形式主語,that they couldn't swim at all是主語從句。 6. 本行無錯。7. girl前加the。此處的girl表特指。8. that→who。who引導非限制性定語從句。 9. too→so。全句使用的是...句型。10. don't→didn't。根據上文情景,此處應該用一般過去時態。

(I)

It was very fine when I got up on last Sunday morning. 1.________

So I decided to go for a walk and took some photos in the 2.________

beautiful country. After breakfast, I carried my camera with 3.________

me and set off. Everything went smooth. I enjoyed my trip 4.________

so much that I didn't realize the weather had been turned 5.________

bad. I began to run and it was too late. I was caught 6.________

at the rain and was wet through. I kept on running until 7.________

I get to a bus stop. I stood there waiting a long time for the 8.________

bus, shivering in cold. Shortly after I got home, I had 9.________

high fever, which made me stay in bed for a whole week! 10.________

(II)

My mother was born in a small town in Italian. She was three 1. ________

when her parents settle in the USA in 1926. They lived in 2. ________

Chicago, that my grandfather's work was making ice cream. 3. ________

At 16, my mother graduated a high school, went on to a 4. ________

secretarial school , and finally worked as secretary for a 5. ________

railroad company. She was beautiful. When a local photographer 6. ________

used some of her picture in his monthly window display, 7. ________

she was very happily. One of her favorite photos showed her 8. ________

sitting by Lake Michigan. My mother was used 9. ________

to say what she was the most beautiful in the town. 10. ________

[答案與解析]

(I) 1. 去掉on。名詞被this, that, next, last等修飾後,其前面一般不用介詞。 2. took→take。take與go是並列關係。 3. 本行無錯。 4. smooth→smoothly。副詞作狀語,修飾went。 5.去掉been。turned在此處是系動詞,不用被動語態。 6. and→but。此處錶轉折關係。7. at→in。表達"被雨淋了"時,常用短語be caught in the rain, 介詞常用in。8. get→got。根據上下文,此處應該用動詞的一般過去時態。9. in→with。shivering with cold意為"凍得渾身發抖",介詞with表示原因,意為"由於"。 10. high前加a。have a high fever是固定短語,意為"發高燒"。

(II) 1. Italian→Italy。此處應該用名詞,表示國家"意大利"。2. settle→settled。由上下文可知,此處應該用動詞的一般過去時態。 3. that→where。where引導非限制性定語從句,修飾先行詞Chicago,where在定語從句中作狀語,相當於in which。

4. graduated後加from。graduate是不及物動詞,表達"畢業於某學校"時,graduate後應該用介詞from。 5. secretary前加a。secretary是可數名詞,其前面應該有冠詞a。 6. 本行無錯。7. picture→pictures。some of後的名詞應該用複數形式,另外,下文也有提示,櫥窗裏陳列的照片不止一張。8. happily→happy。這裏應該用形容詞作表語。 9. 去掉was。本句使用的是"used to + 動詞原形",表達"過去常常......"。10. what→that。that引導賓語從句,that只起連接作用,that本身無詞義。

(I)

The village was always very quiet. The people lived 1. ________

there were busy working in their many field during the day, 2. ________

and went to bed early at night, tiring after a long day's 3. ________

hard work. All of them had lived in a village 4. ________

for all their lives but had never left for less than 5. ________

one day at a time. When they did left, they had to get up 6. ________

early in the morning. They filled their carts of 7. ________

fruit, vegetables and sheep and went the market in the town. 8. ________

They returned back in the evening with things, perhaps 9. ________

presents for their children. That was their life. 10. ________

(II)

I have a very embarrassing experience this evening. 1. ________

I saw a man at a bus stop when I was on my way back 2. ________

home. Though I saw him from behind, but I was sure he was 3. ________

a friend of mine whom I hadn' t seen him for a long time. I gave 4. ________

him a tap on the shoulders with my umbrella and shouted to 5. ________

him at the same time. He turned round, completely taking by 6. ________

surprise. Unfortunately, he was my friend but a complete 7. ________

stranger. He was terribly embarrassed, for I didn't know 8. ________

how to explain him. I could only say in a low voice, "I'm so 9. ________

sorry, sir." After that I walked away as quickly as possibly. 10. ________

[答案與解析]

(I) 1. lived→living或在lived前加who。此處應改為現在分詞作定語或定語從句。2. field→fields。根據語義,此處應該用名詞複數fields。 3. tiring→tired。 tired意為"勞累的",而tiring意為"累人的"。4. a→the。此處的village是第二次出現,應該用定冠詞表特指。 5. less→more。根據上下文語義,此處應該用not more than表示"不超過"。 6. left→leave。助動詞did後應該用動詞原形,did表強調。 7. of→ with。是固定短語。8. went後加to。他們車上裝滿了水果、蔬菜和羊,到鎮上的市場上去賣。 9. 去掉back。return意為"返回", back屬於多餘用詞。10. 本行無錯。

(II) 1. have→had。由下文可知,本篇短文敍述的是過去發生的事情,故用動詞的一般過去時態。 2. 本行無錯。3. 去掉but。 狀語從句中使用了Though, 主句中就不能再用連詞but。 4. 去 掉him。 whom在定語從句中作 hadn't seen的賓語,him屬重複用詞。 5. shoulders →shoulder。由 a tap可知,此處指在肩膀上拍了一下,shoulder應該用單數形式。 6. taking → taken。be taken by surprise是固定短語,意為"大吃一驚"。此處的taken是過去分詞,該短語作狀語。 7. was後加 not。由下文可知,是作者認錯人了。 8. He→I。此處應表達"我很難堪"。 9. explain後加to。 表達"向某人解釋"時,應該用explain to sb.。10. possibly → possible。 possible是固定短語,意為"儘量......; 儘可能......"。

( I )

It was fine yesterday. The sun was shining in the sky. 1. ________

I went for boating by myself. I didn't take any friend with me 2. ________

because I wanted to be alone. I hired a boat and rowing slowly 3. ________

to a center of the lake. A fresh breeze was blowing, 4. ________

fish were swimming and birds were singing. While I reached 5. ________

the center, I took up the paddles(槳)and laid down in the boat. 6. ________

With the blue sky over me or green water around me, 7. ________

I was extremely relaxed. Over two hour passed in this way 8. ________

before I knew it. I came back home very lately. I didn't feel 9. ________

tired at all, for I had really had good time. 10. ________

( II )

In July 20, 1969, Neil Armstrong walked on the surface of 1. ________

the moon. He saw that the ground was hard and there were 2. ________

lots of dust that looked as gray powder. He traveled from 3. ________

the earth in a spaceship calling ApolloⅡ. Then, while it stayed 4. ________

in the space and moved around the moon, he climbed into 5. ________

a small lunar module (登月艙). It brought him to the moon. 6. ________

He spent three hours pick up moon rocks. 7. ________

After that, he set equipment to measure the temperature 8. ________

and wind on the moon. After he finished his works, 9. ________

he planted an American flag in the ground. 10. ________

[答案與解析]

(I) 1. 本行無錯。2. 去掉for。go doing是常用的固定詞組。3. rowing → rowed。hired和rowed是由and連接的兩個並列的謂語動詞。4. a → the。center後面有限制性定語修飾,其前面應該用定冠詞。5. While → When / As。當while引導時間狀語從句時,從句中的謂語動詞應該用延續性動詞,而非終止性動詞。 6. laid → lay。動詞lie表"躺"時的過去式是lay, laid是動詞lay的過去式。 7. or → and。此處並非錶轉折關係。 8. hour → hours。可數名詞hour前有數詞two的修飾,故名詞應該用複數形式。 9. lately → late。副詞late意為"晚";副詞lately意為"近來"。 10. good前加a。have a good time為固定詞組。

(II) 1. In → On。在表示具體的日期前,應該用介詞on。2. were → was。dust是不可數名詞,謂語動詞應該用單數。 3. as → like。look like是固定詞組,意為"看起來像"。 4. calling → called。該分詞與所修飾的名詞之間是動賓關係,故此處用過去分詞作定語。 5. 去掉第一個the。space前一般不用冠詞。 6. brought → took。此處指"帶去",而不是"帶來"。 7. pick → picking。spend time (in) doing sth. 是固定句型。 8. set後面加up。set up是固定詞組,意為"安放"。 9. works → work。 work意為"工作"時,是不可數名詞。10. 本行無錯。