上海高考英語滿分作文範文

【作文題目】

描述你在學校的一次午餐，具體要求如下：

詳細描述用餐的情況

簡要表述你對這次午餐的感受

這是一篇簡單卻需要挖掘的文章，因為如果只是描述用餐情況，顯然缺乏深度，誇誇其談，流於表面。學生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細考慮用餐背後的東西。比較容易想到的話題是食物浪費、用餐衞生、餐桌禮儀等。在創作範文中，筆者另闢蹊徑，通過大多數同齡人用餐時的匆忙來襯托“我”的`悠然自得，凸顯出在緊張的高中學生生涯中，作者能夠留有一片心靈淨土，通過飲食來調節情緒，更好地面對挑戰，表現出樂觀的人生態度。此文結構簡單，文筆清新，語言精準，並運用了高中階段常見的語法結構，不失為一個很好的作文模板，供學生借鑑。

【作文範文】

The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had ingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found

elsewhere.

The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.